Im working on a English exercise and need support.
I upload the first draft with feedback
Main things for revision, as youll see from my comments: First, along with Pinocchio, you must include reference to the Billman article. Thats a requirement for the paper. You may not use any other sources by critics or from the internet.
Second, you need to keep the focus on landscapethe geography and physical features of the country Pinocchio inhabits. Right now, there are several paragraphs where you re-tell the story of Pinocchios creation or other plot points. While these are often important moments in Pinocchios development, theyre not an analysis of landscape, and so arent pertinent to the subject of this paper. Finally, make sure you format and cite appropriately. Youll see on the last page that Ive corrected your citation of Pinocchio. Youll need to add an entry for Billman, and to cite the article properly in the paper as well. Use MLA format for in-text citations and for the article and book citations at the end of the essay. Purdues OWL site (which is one of the resources on our Blackboard page) gives specific examples.
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