Im working on a English question and need guidance to help me study.
Professor feedback
Nebel,
A stronger title would help lend interest to your work.
You might consider including a dramatic anecdote as an opening in which you describe one of the reported attacks.
The organization of your essay stands out. You do a good job of providing a logical structure for your ideas.
You are going to need to explain ICT infrastructure since that is definitely not common knowledge.
You could probably say more about what can be done to shore up the vulnerabilities.
Solid work.
I also write and highligt in yellow a comment he put on the Essay. He put three comments you will see it when you open the file.
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