Im working on a English question and need guidance to help me study.
For this assignment you need to revise and add 3 pages to a 3 page paper already written.
You need to also include a paragraph on how you improved your paper and what you added to it.
Teacher Comments Based off Exploratory Paper 3:
A great topic and also you found some great criticism to read. Here, however, I think you had to work to quickly and there are a lot of issues with grammar, punctuation, and clarity I didnt notice in your earlier work. For example, the second sentence says the opposite of what you mean, which is that The African American people suffered many infractions against their legal rights. . . How would you fix it? There are similar problems throughout. Proofreading would help. Also, you get stuck on a few words and repeat them all the time, words such as broadcast. This is something we always have to guard against. You might also take a look at Isabel Wilkerson, The Warmth of Other Suns, should you want to expand this.
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