Need finale draft for PSA part 1 finished….. | Online Homework Aiders

I don’t know how to handle this English question and need guidance.

Here is the link to my paper…

file:///C:/Users/jalia/Documents/ENG%20112/PSA%201%20draft-1570848332000.pdf

Here are the corrections i was giving on my paper……

1. This looks like an APA header. For this essay, we are doing MLA. I know it’s confusing!

2. Awkward phrasing.

3. I would start your essay here.

4. I would take out references to what a PSA is since the Ad Council (your imagined audience) already knows. Rather I would be more open about what you want to focus on. What is the issue at hand and why does it demand attention?

5. Also, one thing to think about is what do you want your audience to do with the information? Since we can’t always prevent mass shootings, maybe you can tell people what to do in case such a situation arises?

6. Source?

7. Source>

8. This is a good idea. However, PSAs can’t change laws. Rather, they focus on behavior individuals can do. What can the average American do to change this situation?