English Edit

You have absolutely the right idea about what this rhetorical analysis should do! The second draft should FOCUS ON SPECIFICS. At this point, I don’t even know what the organization is, who’s involved, what it does, etc. etc. etc. It’s also very important that you “situate” yourself in this organization. What role do you play? How do your role and your perspective shape what you observe and what you concluded? Again, this sounds like a really rich community to study, but I need to understand what it is first so that I can guide you a bit more specifically.

I will be sharing a sort of “template” with everyone in the next day to help you understand what kinds of information you’ll need to develop to help us “outsiders” really understand your community.